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1. Why Redrafting Is a Core Skill

First Drafts Are Supposed to Have Weaknesses

What "Precision" Actually Means in Legal Writing

2. Common Weaknesses in First-Draft Legal Writing

The Five Most Common First-Draft Weaknesses

Practice Text: Spotting First-Draft Weaknesses

3. A Systematic Redrafting Method

A Four-Pass Redrafting Method

Practice Redraft: Applying the Method

4. Practice Redraft

Full Practice: Redraft This Paragraph Yourself

Model Redraft and Self-Check

Quiz

Question 1: Which of these is the clearest example of "vague timing"?

Question 2: In the four-pass redrafting method, what does Pass 3 check for?

Question 3: In the Model Redraft (Lesson 9), why does the model KEEP some hedging ("whether compensation will be offered")?

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